http://crimsonmorgan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] crimsonmorgan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] scarletmorning 2011-07-06 05:09 pm (UTC)

A bit 8D And I forgot to add that Frelia is kind of an ass towards Grado because he has Renais. And is smug and is all "nänänänä, I have the girl~"

It would be nothing big. Just reading through it maybe once and telling me if the tense switch makes the change in the narrative clear enough. A matter of a few minutes. But if you don't feel up to it, no problem.

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