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scarletmorningI HATE CLEFT SENTENCES! Please go die in a hole, kthnxbai.
Edited to say: I also hate English paragraphs. Please die in a fire, kthnxbai.
Anyway.
Jiji loves to kill her toys. Especially the new cat fishing rod (or whatever you call those things); she loves chasing and licking feathers. :3
But now, BROKINGS! 8D
I haz moar drabbles~ If there is strange wordage again, do tell me :3 (I think you should be able to comment with your lj accounts over there... at least I think I enabled it...) (New Edit: I also posted it on ff.net now.)
I think Hayden may be my favourite king at the moment. Maybe because we actually know about him. He's the only king who really has some screen time and doesn't die. And then there is also Tana´s C support with Syrene <3 I love the lines about Hayden <3 (The drabble "Core" is actually inspired by those lines). Hayden is awesome~ He can be glad that his children aren't the main characters, otherwise he would've died at the beginning of the game~ Innes´ birth was probably like this:
Nurse: Sir!
Hayden: What is it!?
Nurse: It's a minor character.
Hayden: THANK GOODNESS!
Gotta love him. Fado and Vigarde are very close on second place though. Ismaire has her own tier~
Edited to say: I also hate English paragraphs. Please die in a fire, kthnxbai.
Anyway.
Jiji loves to kill her toys. Especially the new cat fishing rod (or whatever you call those things); she loves chasing and licking feathers. :3
But now, BROKINGS! 8D
I haz moar drabbles~ If there is strange wordage again, do tell me :3 (I think you should be able to comment with your lj accounts over there... at least I think I enabled it...) (New Edit: I also posted it on ff.net now.)
I think Hayden may be my favourite king at the moment. Maybe because we actually know about him. He's the only king who really has some screen time and doesn't die. And then there is also Tana´s C support with Syrene <3 I love the lines about Hayden <3 (The drabble "Core" is actually inspired by those lines). Hayden is awesome~ He can be glad that his children aren't the main characters, otherwise he would've died at the beginning of the game~ Innes´ birth was probably like this:
Nurse: Sir!
Hayden: What is it!?
Nurse: It's a minor character.
Hayden: THANK GOODNESS!
Gotta love him. Fado and Vigarde are very close on second place though. Ismaire has her own tier~
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27/1/11 23:11 (UTC)Especially the first one. Because it's perfect.
Your wording looks okay. The only error I saw is you sometimes put commas after questions:
["Pray tell why?", Vigarde answered with heavy sarcasm dripping from his voice.]
No comma after questions :3
I like Hayden, too. The others, I have to make up a lot for. But I think we see Vigarde the same way.
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27/1/11 23:20 (UTC)Huh? o-O Where did that comma come from? German rules seems to have sneaked in.
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27/1/11 23:28 (UTC)(no subject)
28/1/11 01:32 (UTC)O_o
Is there something unusual about English paragraphs?
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28/1/11 01:34 (UTC)And I have to write one in my exam D: